One

by Corrie   May 21, 2005


You won we over with just one single glance.
One gaze into your eyes and I knew that you would be mine.
With that one first dance, you had me caught up in your trance.
One kiss from your lips and I knew it would always be you I couldnt resist.

**Everybody has that "one person" who you just knew.. That one person who you'll just never be able to fully get over.. It's your first love.. and you remember all of your firsts with them, thats all this is about, I know its simple, but i think its true.. Please comment**

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    excellent.. Wow I think Ive commented on all your poems!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    short and simple good read I liked it . Keep up the good work...

  • 18 years ago

    by robbie

    hey corrie
    wazz up
    i read you're poem about first love
    and it touched me for a very strong reason.
    i just broke up from my first girlfriend, and i know ill miss her forever.
    she was my first everything.
    it might sound geeky but she was the first person i kissed, and i was 18 years old.
    good job
    i liked you're other poems, but some of them freaked me out.
    good job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    I KNOW exactly wut u mean! so now i know my ex-bf was my first love b/c i really never knew id he was but NOW I KNOW! cuz now i have a bf but i still isnt over him...well that was good writing! if u want u can check out mine poems....peace out!!! xoxox-Sarah

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