Hole instead of a Heart

by Corrie   May 21, 2005


I would be lying if I said it didnt hurt.
I guess I should have thought about all this first.
I should have thought, long and hard before I gave you my heart.
Because now I'm left with a hole instead of a heart.

It's all my fault for being blind to see, that your "I love yous" were empty.
I should have listened to what they told me,
Because they all knew your "I love yous" were empty.
It's all my fault I believed your lies, I wish I would have known you were just another snake in disguise.

*!WaRnInG!* ~Careful who you give your heart to!
Because now I'm left with a hole instead of a heart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    It's short, but good for a beginner. I read your post and you said you weren't very good, but you must be crazy. This poem is great! Keep writing, if you practice, you can only get better!

    -Ice

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Great job man! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by David Paul

    wow. That goes deeper than most. Short and to the point. I like it. good job. kilman = David B. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bredada

    I LIKE YOUR POEM IS SO TRUE U CAN NEVER JUST TRUST ANYONE WITH YOUR HEART

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    I can feel the pain behind the words in this poem, you have conveyed this well!

    Keep Writing
    Nici