Pretend

by Jacob M Parnell   May 22, 2005


The pain is overwhelming.
Will it ever end?
Abolishing any memory.
I wish I could just pretend.
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Pretend like there is nothing wrong.
Make you believe im fine
Make us get along.
Keep your feelings of me divine.
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Just to pretend for 5 minutes.
Would be so great.
If only you knew.
The amount of pain you, yourself create.
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Pretending is a deception.
One I wish I knew.
The only reason I want to pretend.
Is because in reality, I do.

--(C)-- JP
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  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    Great as ALWAYS plz comment on mine thanks JP

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    Makes me wonder if i pretend and don't even know it. i really liked this. it's one of those that make me want to go sit in front of the mirror and discover who i really am. ya know? 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tasha

    It was short but it said so much at the same time. I really like this one. It may be my favorite one of yours so far. Oh ya I really love how you write comments on your own poems. lol. bye.

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah

    I see you have your fair share of comments but would you mind commenting and reading sum of mine?

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana Moreno Covarrubias

    Great poem very true & thanks again for the comment and vote I am returning the favor.
    ~Ariana Moreno~

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