wow i think this is prolly one of the best poems ive read..its really good..it makes you realize how strong love is.. good job

Awesome poem....Thanks for the comment.

wow its so weird how this poem is EXACTLY the same as one of my past relatioships cuz he hates me now 2 since i hurt him and i regret it so much!! great poem i loved it good job!!

I know exactly how you feel. I just broke up with my bf about a month ago. He started saying things about me. So, I thought that I was ready to move. I started dating this guy that's my bff and that only lasted for 3 days cuz I realized that I wasn't over the other guy. My bff was cool about it, but the other guy thought that I used my bff just to get him made. So, now he's "suposively" dating this other girl. I'm getting over it or at least trying to. If you want to talk to me you can e-mail me if you want.

Thats amazing! The last verse is powerful!
Ele xxx

I loved it

it seems lyk you didnt finish the poem...i would go back and make a good ending part to close it off with!!!...thats just mee but its a good poem!!

Man by far the best poem i have ever read on this site, and prolly one of the best ive ever even seen great job!

hey, nice poem! especially the last "paragraph" ! 5/5

You seem to end all of your poems in such a great way! The endings make the poems even better! You are a very talented writer! I am glad I have come across your work! I hope to read more! ~Brooke~

This is just as good as the first, and there's fresh ideas. Rhymes are good, and still you have the fillings. Your love poems make me smile :)

Another beautiful love poem. Very nice rhythm.

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Another great poem! i really liked it!
the only thing was this line..

"If we were together,
I wouldn't let go.
You were the only one for me,
Until I let go."
maybe if you could find a different rhyme instead of using let go twice...

but it's still a great poem! 5/5
take care, xoxoxo