wow nada your totally right this rocks and its exactly what i need for the dramatic monologue! if you wouldn't mind me using it that is....?

Heya,

This was a great poem :) It was really sad but deep!

I don't know why but I really loved this stanza!

"Like Pandora's box
They manage to escape
Cause havoc, pain and distress
And leave me to contemplate"

well done huni and stay strong!!

luv you xxx

your poems are all excellent!I like how some of the rymes are really clever, like am and understand.