I'm Like A Puzzle

by AntiSocial16   May 23, 2005


I’m like a puzzle with lost pieces
So incompletely put together
Almost perfect to their eyes
Yet inside, broken forever

The pieces to my edges
Are solidly all there
But it’s the inside that I’m missing
And a heart with which to care

The days I live get harder
And I fix myself everyday
But with all the struggles I’ve endured
More and more pieces seem to stray

So then at night I cry
A tear for each piece I’ve lost
My tears soak the pieces I have
And, again, I pay a cost

Now I’m incomplete, drenched in pain
And drowning in more sorrow
So I try to sleep and begin to think
It’ll all just happen again tomorrow

not too proud bout this one, let me know what you think! thanks!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Very good its so true life is one big puzzle you are not alone in these feelings.

    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky drake

    It is very well written, as you are a very talented writer....I just wish you wern't so unhappy, I pray for you each time I read your work.....I pray that you will remember that YOU ARE A TRULY SPECIAL GIFT.....to all of us that read your work, and keep it up. Your emotions are so real in every word......Thank you for sharing, Love ya Becky

  • 18 years ago

    by She Is Now Gone Away

    this was great and i believe you should be reall proud about this one cause thats how i feel sometimes.