Nature

by Morgan   May 23, 2005


Look how the trees blow in the wind

Look how the birds tweet, tweet, tweet

Look how the butterflies fly all around

Look how the bunnies look so sweet

Please rate and comment.

Like I did with another poem, I was just experimenting with a nature poem. Please tell me if it was good or not! Thanks a ton.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    for one liners this would be the king but for a fulfilling poem I would have to rate it a 3 sorry it just lacked to much to be very intresting. If you get time please any of my featured work and comment and vote it would mean a great deal to me. Take care...

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    It could have been better if you added more! I wouldnt consider this a poem, more like a quote!