Needs Revising

This ink flows so perfectly,
A discrepancy to life,
Years taunted by wondering,
I don't want to count the days.

I'm crying because I'm questioning,
The only stability in my life;
It's hard to breathe just thinking about
How you'll take away my light.

Tears falling faster than her health,
I'm tired of the same old song,
God, if I pray forever,
Will you make it all alright?

She may make the brightest star,
In your heavenly sky...
But here on earth she is much
Too needed: Don't play us with a five

[Five more years is nothing]
Give her the rest of her life
We're only little girls,
What happened to forever?

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For my best friend, who has a limited amount of time left.