Ohh wow, that was just amazing, one of the best poems ever. This is so true and I know that alot of people in here can really relate, so do I. I use to cut every day, but I'm trying sooo hard to stop, cause I can't keep hurting myself and the people in my life. This poem made me realize that stopping is the right thing to do.....Every time I feel the need to cut, I write a poem.... Thank you so much for sharing this poem =0)

*Love Sabrina*

ur poetry is so deep.. and its so good i wouldnt change a thing to any of your poems... i <3 them...btw if u ever need anythinng im here 5/5 again

great poem! i love it! really true and so deep it was really amazing and i'm glad that i got a chance to read this! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

nice good way to tell cutters the truth i am proud i havent cut myself in about two months have a good day and keep writing your very good

I'm sorry to say this, but i think this poem is really offending. being a cutter my self, its not that easy. You cant just stop....when things hurt so much..you need something to controll...something to hold on to. and cutting helps. so unless u've been a cutter, you wont know what it feels like.

Very well done! An exellent message! I have never cut so I don't know what it is like. You painted a good picture of what it would feel like! Good work! Take Care! ~Brooke~

*claps* so F'ing true its not even funny. you've captured my feelings and put it to words. if only people could read this stuff before its too late. like if i had read this a year ago i wudnt have started...well okay im stubborn so i probably would have, but i beleive i wud have stopped before it became too late. keep up the good work...
~Freak~

I liked it, eventhou I hate sharp objects, check out mine when you have time.

Once again, a great poem about cutting...And once again, I like the rhyming scheme...

You write about cutting like no one else does, at least none I've read....

I never really thought about cutting in the way you present it in this poem...Great job. I'm impressed!

I like the way you have put your point across, I found it inspiring and it has given me a sort of hope, yet the addiction of self harming will always be very hard to over come

5/5

L x

I really liked this and "love always"....so true, and so upfront. Great job. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

I liked it.... especially that last 4 lines... n_n

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM!!! THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

Cool stuff,
im not a cutter, but ive written cutting poems. i dont believe in that stuff..

Hey, i reallly like this poem. the message was very strong, and very true. one thing tho
Because today might be you*R* last day

thats all. still, very very good. keep it up

There are scars on my legs
And scars on my arms
I just can't figure out
Why I love doing myself harm....

Good work
Vanessa
xoxoxo

"Then* you didn’t think it would"

than*

"The first few seconds are such are* relief"

a*

Wow... That was a very good poem... It was very original and I loved the message... It was full of emotion and it was beautiful! I even thought it was kind of inspirational... I think that anyone thinking of cutting or who currently cuts now, should read this poem and maybe they will think twice before continuing... because I know that a lot of people that cut want to die very badly, but at the same time, they are very scared of death, yet they continue mutilating themselves and causing more damage than before... Anyway... I really liked it, it was a very good poem! Keep up the wonderful work!

~BJ~

I'm guessing this line: 'And that is only the start' was added to rhyme with 'heart' but I don't think that there needs to be a rhyme in this place, because the lines stand up strong enough on their own.
I think that you really got right into it with this one - what you write is very true and doesn't sound overly cliched at all, which is something that happens to many other cutting poems.

Wow.. good job... i like this poem because for once its anitcutting instead of cutting... and its showing people that its not the answer... really really nice job... i love all of your poems and i will try to comment on as many as i can...

sammie

Hey awesome poem and thanks for givin me a link to this site