Ritual Pursuit

by Biscuit   May 24, 2005


Running for her life she fled,
out into the dark night air,
her piercing scream awoke the dead,
on she hurried without a care.

She knew not what she ran from,
nor where her path would lead,
she was driven on by hatred,
or so it would seem.

Scurrying through the undergrowth,
her lower limbs torn,
flickering, hesitant, full of loath,
her inner self was born.

She wanted to escape this fear,
to her sins she must confess,
she needed but a listening ear,
to save her from this darkness.

As Satan lured her onward,
her soul mourned her return,
she stumbled on the white-hot coals,
and she could feel it burn.

(age 14)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Nice! liked it.
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Nice poem
    very well written
    very picturesque... expressesses the scene so well
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Ramy medhat

    Very nice poem..i like it so much..keep up the good work :)

  • Yeah, i liked this.
    I prefer dark poems, so i found this was one of your best pieces, well done.

    xxx cici xxx

  • Well I suppose it wouldn't be a dark poem if it had a happy ending now would it? Still, I thought it was quite good. I like when they are short and sweet. Unless they are epic, then long is ok. Anyway, keep up the good work.