Sounds like you're getting an unfair deal, Nick. hang in there!

Sounds like you're getting an unfair deal, Nick. hang in there!

It's not one of your best ones, but I like what it stands for :) I understand what you are feeling still, and that is a good characteristic of good poems. So keep it up, you are having a better day than I am. My teacher practically threatened my wellbeing today...which was amusing...but oh well.. tata:)

Eden

this is not weak!!! i really like it. im glad to hear you're not like most guys. i really respect that. anyways, amazing poem. keep it up!
-xXx-

i commend you! that is great. THat is soooo GREAT!! I agree with Eden, not your best writing, but i love the subject. The point is clear!

Stay Strong!

some gurls are also very closed minded but just stay strong and one day they will see that they missed a good chance with a good guy. its true!
much love
~michelle~

I agree with everyone, except the fact that this poem was weak. On the contrary, you were expressing your opinion, and an opinion can not be called weak because it is your own. I may have a different opinion, but that doesn't make your poem, or your opinion weak. So keep hanging in here, love, lol. I am. I'm so happy to hear about your new baby!! lol! Awww.....is he, or is it a she, cute? I certainly hope so!!!!!!!!!

Babe, I noticed lately that you're stressing about what those jack ***** say about you at school or w.e. You don't need to hit someone or screw some girl to gain popularity. And I think that that is what makes you a better person. I find you very charming, and if other people can't see it, then they're not worth you. You're soooooooooo special (compliment), and you have your OWN ideas which make you all the more of an individual. Who wants to be like the rest, right?

Just be yourself, screw the rest of those who don't believe in you. I believe in you, I'm sure Jamey, is that her name? lol, i've forgotten completely, but I'm sure she believes in you too. You're such a talented poet, a great friend, and like I've said, you're charming. Any girl who doesn't see that, they're too stupid to have your love or friendship. Just saying. Hang in there!!!

All my love!

~Sierra