wow hun this rocks! its really gd and full of meaning! xox

Thanks for the comment on "Organized Conformity"... my beliefs are way different than most, but I'm happy being original.
I believe in a higher power, in which I don't worship. I talk to this God, I write letters to this God, I treat him like a friend sorta to say. And I don't believe in nor follow the Bible, religions, nor churches. I use wisdom and creativity to take me where I want to go. -And thats the small elements of my philosophy...get it? lol

And you don't know how you're going, well i'd have to say you're doing a really good job writing... this poem is very well written, but try different concepts. It seems like death poems are blasting this site. That's the only suggestion I have to you, but the poem in itself is very good. Keep up the good work and stay in touch!

Love, Heather.

Thanks again, Sarah.
Actually, it's my own original belief. I don't know if anyone out there believes like I do, and if they have, I haven't met them yet.
But thanks for saying i was interesting=)
May God Bless You.

Very good, nice write. Keep it up. Thanks for the comment. Take care.

~no more

And you thought my poem made YOU cry! My dad is this way and it seems that I could die and he'd be like aw to bad. I know what this feels like. I loved this poem 5/5!
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

LIEK THIS ONE.... REALLY EXPRESSIVE

omg sarah....that was sooooo good!!!! I loved it sooo much

You are going very well judging by this poem it very good and presented very well keep it up and you can do no wrong!

take care

Great poem-loved the last two lines

"Never a time did he know
Without his love, she would let go"

It sums up the poem really well 5/5