That is just remarkable! Loved reading as usual. Thanks for the reply to my message. :)

very deep, much more so than a lot i read from people ur age on this site. Very well done, u write much deeper than ur age shows!

good poem! 5 I read it like a song! its very catchy! lol

great. loved it

Jacs
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excellent poem, or song, whichever works best.. dont change it at all, its great