aww thats really goood! i really liked this poem. you have a lot of talent for sure. I really like the 3rd stanza. Great poem!

Hey i do like it - kinda creeps me out a bit cos i'm not one for thinking about things like that. Brilliant poem though - I really do like your work alot. It just inspires me so much :)

Good poem! very sad! 5 dont forget to check out sum of my poems!

I love the first line.
Because I use it often.
that just grabbed my attention.
the rest of the poem is good :)

Another piece that stands out, set of by it's unique delivery.

Keep Writing
Nici

great job , it has a dark n deep meaning behind it that is truly splendid.