I would like to say i actually wrote this poem has an english assignment. We were suppose to write as if we were some sort of road or walkway. So if it sounds weird to you thats why lol

good poem! check out sum of my poems plz!

Very good dark poem. Well thought out you did an amazing job. Keep it up! ~Brooke~

justlike ur not a fan of love poems, im not a big fan of dark ones but i relaly liked this one, great job!!

that was great! keep it up =).
very dark ..MUHAHAHA..lol. =)

This poem was very good i liked it a lot....keep on writing and don't worry if certain ppl don't like your poems or if they rate you low you always have to look at who does like your poems..so don't quit writing okay...

ttyl
Maddy

wow. thats all i can say wow!

Jacs
xxx

wow !! that's all I have to say...

Very nice. I really enjoyed it, again, very well written.

Kalika