by Ashleigh Skye May 27, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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The tiny sparkling strand, |
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u have an excellent talent wen it comes to poetry loved ur poem |
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good, but dont use the word 'thing' so much. it takes away from the images you are trying to send... |
by Lyla
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I know im getting repetitive here but great job!!! lol |