Thought your ryhme was weak! But over all it was a good poem, not to my taste as it wasn't strong enough but i hope you ok and Take Care
Kt xx

what was weak about it? im not a very good poem writer because i havent been writing them for long, i really just write them to get my feelings out and im not really ok. :'(

i liked it great poem
its steph again by da way.i no how ya feel u can get past it i am slowly

*sobs* that shows so well how a innocent little child to a depressed adolescent...it so good...yet its sad..
Love ya Lotz
(Lozz)