Our Day at the Carnival

by Prince Enigma   May 29, 2005


Watching the merry-go-around,
Moving up and down,
Lifting her up, she held on very tight,
We were like kids on a playground.

Watching the roller coaster,
Moving slow and fast,
Holding hands, she closed her eyes,
We were a couple having a blast.

Watching the carnival games,
Took me a few tries,
To finally win the biggest teddy bear,
Oh well, I already have the grand prize.

Under the "Tunnel of Love" we go,
Dark and quiet, we did not care,
As we blow kisses of heaven,
Our love filled the air.

As midnight came,
We both looked above,
Watching the beautiful fireworks,
We knew this was true love.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    wow, i love this one. very good. you write excellent love poems...so far from what I read. keep writing and take care

    -oh and thank you for your comment-

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    A real change from your other poem, but still worth a read! Not so much description here though it still works well.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by SilentSymphony

    I like this one, it sounds like something out of a movie. And the fact that your feelings are clearly shown. Nice poem.

    -Courtney

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I have had a few ups and downs but i am usually a very happy, lively person who always makes people smile. I am very lovable :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey Minx + pinx is me. I have 2 accounts - all my poems arent bad - read some of these i have about 50. This is my main account. Thanks for your comments. The other account is so that if family or close friends stumble across it they wont know its me. I just needed to get those feelings out as they have been bottled up for nearly 5 years.

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