Troubled Thoughts

by Already Beautiful   May 30, 2005


Darkness clouds my judgement,
fear is my only friend.
I'll travel by my lonesome self,
until i reach my end.
my mind is full of shadows,
my heart is gold no more.
I push the one's that love me,
Till their hearts are bleeding roar.

My Emptiness surrounds me,
Dreams shattered on the floor.
I try to pick the pieces up,
but it cuts me even more.
One day, I might be better,
And make my family proud,
But today is not that day,
To sadness I am bound.

So until that day I'm standing tall,
Push me from your mind,
Forget I once existed here,
To death I am assigned

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  • 17 years ago

    by Naerwen

    I really appreicate this poem, beautifully written. Soothing flow and intriguing wording. Well Done. 5/5

    Naerwen

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow i dont remember writing that comment...hmm:S
    yeh more than 5/5...that was great. i can't belive how much i feel the same...
    keep writing and take care x x x
    PS: plz comment on some of my poems sometime?>..

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    this is really ...'deep' for lack of better word. i know exactly how you feel...its so hard to not give up. but please don't...i love your writing. x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    This poem is soo well written! Very expressive. I love it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by mayme

    very very good. i love it...I love all of it-there isn't one line i prefer over the others-every word is important. very good job.

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