Comments : Crawling

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow, it really touched my heart, I love it!!! I love the way you always let all of your emotions out on your poems, it's like I know you...Hope that you are feeling better soon...I send you all of my love and best wishes..

    *Hugs sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    WHAZZZZZZZZZZZUP? :P I LUVY LUVY LUVY DIS ONE!!! It's like someone you really care about does these completely hurtful things to you but they don't care when you finally get hurt...which SUX. Thanx 4 the comment! Yeah, I guess I'm ok, maybe I'm just gettin OLD, hee hee. =) Thank u SOOOOO much, you have really helped me figure out things about myself just by commenting on my poems. I'm glad I can make you smile. Well, I'll type to ya l8r. LOVE ALWAYS AND FOREVER KAL, ARI

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    I'm not really much for words today but it was a very nice poem.
    Much luv,
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    hey sorry i've been gone all weekend so i don't know if i'm late for commenting on it or how new it is. great write though! i really hope everything is clearing up for the better! always look for clear blue skies!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    nice write..I hope your ok..5/5 defidently. <3333

  • 18 years ago

    by CynicxSincexBirth

    that was really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    Well i thought it was great even if you think its not your best. My favorite part was

    Crawling on my hands and knees,
    to stay within your view
    Just another worthless sorry
    Another forgotten i love you.

    Keep it up stay strong
    Much luv,
    Nikki

  • 18 years ago

    by Megin

    Good Job! 5/5 .. check out mine and let me know what u think! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky drake

    wow, for not one of your best, I'm totally amazed, this was the first one of yours that I've read, and I plan on reading the others you have posted, because you are very talented.....great job thanks for sharing Love ya, becky

  • 18 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    this really touched me, your so good at writing, i feel for you... take care hun
    i will never write anything as good as this.
    [[samz]]<3