AMAZIN! Thank-you 4 submitting this poem. My little sister recently died of cancer and ever sincxe I've been thinking of ending all the pain n jst pickin up a blade, ur poem makes me feel so much stronga. Agen I wil say thanks, If no one els comments jst remba how much uv helpd me Lx

great write. Truely amazing. <3333

that was really good. Please read my featured poem an tell me what ya think.
<3*Erin

just wanna thank u all for commenting it is really nice to get some feed back. if u spot any mistakes or think i can improve in anyway please feel free to tell me and i will be very grateful. thanks again

great poem!!!! im glad u can be strong!! keep it up!!!! :)

*~peace and love!*

i love this poem...how at first you have two perspectives..very interesting..it changed my heart in a second. excellent!

i wish the sun light WOULD come...good poem though!
-alexandra

amazing this is so good, u got me in tears and i don't really know why? maybe i just needed a good cry, great poem!!!!!
much luv, mandie :)

That was beautiful. I want to let my friend read this poem. The girl in this poem reminds me of her. Feel free to read my poem ALL OF ME.

~nada
thats ok hun. i found it quite amusing!
well thanks to everyone for the comments and im glad you enjoyed it.
all my love
sam x

is is such a good poem i am going thru hard times right now n dis really helped thanx 5/5 keep writing luv rach