OMFG HUN. This was abSOLUTLEY amazing! So much intense emotion; very sad. It left me feeling empty and wanting to reach out and help you. I loved the description in this and the way you compared your mature; must be strong feelings with your more adolesent; child-like feelings. I loved it more than words could say! :D

Luvvoo always <3.
- Kallllll.

omg this poem was so good, sent goose bumps down spine! sometimes it's nice to be alone, but once the lonleyness sinks in then it's nit nice at all, even worst is feeling lonely in a room full of poeple you know!

~i don't relate to my poetry, i just seem to reach those emotions, maybe they can make a difference for someone someday.~

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

~love your comments~

wow...absolutely beautiful!!!!! wow...i love it!!! great work. keep it up!
-xXx-
P.S. thanks for the comment. it means the world to me.

good work bo...
take care,
-Allen

Hee hee no problem. Thanx!

WOW omg!! your such a good writer!! I love your poems! Sorry i couldn't comment for all of them :D but i voted :) 5/5 for this one! keep up the wikid work!

XxX

Too cool, great poem

cute sad poem! =) i like it! 25/5!

i love all of your poems...they're so sad/cool...
love alwayz,
angie

Omg i toally pictured that as i read it. Really awesome... you're on my favourites you know!!
take care hun, please x x x

OMG that made me remember a time when I was little and I was so scared of the crawl space to the attic I could swear someone was watching me. Silly now !! Great poem , it held my interest till the very end