So sad sweetie! Loved it!
Love always...
Haily
xoxoxoxoxo

Really deep poem this one - Very powerful and extremely well written as always.

Nice one.

xXx

Great poem, the flow was a lil choppy in parts though but i think that if you have a set style through it, it will work better so have for example 4 lines a stanza and rhyme AABB or ABAB.... Just a thought....Well done though, it was good

thank you!!!

reallly good, and like like Laura said, its deep.. ur a really good writer! *KISSES*~Corrie