Comments : The Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    wow... awesome. is this one of those poems that relates to human actions? it sounds like it... it was very beautiful. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Piper

    i wrote on kind of like it check it out its called "a rose" and comment please to tell me what you think

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    this was short but good i liked your choice of words.. well done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    nice work on this poem. it allows for alot of imaging....very picturesque.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    This poem is good, and seems to me a metaphor of love.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    now roses...roses is something in nature i love. extremely lovely poem...wonderful use of imagery. thanks.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    wow. im kind of speechless. great job. 5/5
    love
    paulette

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ohhh i love the sharpness in the words you used. The adjectives gives all the objects such a dark image. Awesome.

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    diffrent, i like the symbolism in this, you dont see that much with young writers. I realy enjoyed this peice...great work.

    ~Breeze

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    great metopher of life. that was really moving. great job. i would give it a 10/5 if i could but i cant so u'll ahve to stick with a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    This poem was very sad, but put an image in my head as I read it, which only few talented writers can do. Keep it up ღ

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I liek the idea, just a few spellign errors but good job! I really liek your poems:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    I didn't like this one as m uch as the other two but it was still very well written...nice job..luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    I really liked the style you used in this poem. It had nice imagery as well. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by None

    Eh...again,you pick topics that are a bit cliche...like a rose.the poem was a bit repetitous also,with all of the

    "the rose"
    and just the word 'the' in general.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I'm not sure what to say...It's rather good though. So many things could be replaced as the rose...meaning, how we often feel. Another good job my dear Chad.

    Love,
    DarkSuicide

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was a beautiful metaphor of life. it sounds jsut like mine. i felt what i thnk u were feeling and it was pretty strng. keep pouring ur emotions out, it makes it beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    The rose, blown around by the piercing wind.
    Wind, unrelenting and unforgiving.

    I love those lines! I think im gonna add u to my favs, also I loved your choice of wording in this poem 5.5 awsome write

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    More beautiful imagery in this poem that let me take an interesting lesson from it. Rose imagery is common so it is hard to use it well, and I think you did a rather good job with it.

    -Tainted Mikochan