Comments : It's not that long...

  • 17 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Please Vote and comment on my poem please!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by killix

    wow....this is a good poem. just wondering, is this about your dad or some one you know who went to jail? any way kool poem. keep writing. good charlotte rocks!!! XoXo take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyla

    this is a really good poem and that meant so much to me for you commenting on my poem! your a great writer! keep it up!

    much love!

  • 17 years ago

    by silence kills

    Great poem! & thanks for the comment it means a lot to me to know what other people think

  • 17 years ago

    by chris

    good poem and thanks for commenting on mine. keep up the good work

  • good job i like it keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Excellent poem. you really did a great job on this one. Thank you so much for your comments by the way. They really mean alot to me. xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess09

    damn thats good gets me thinkin keep writin 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by michelle suzzanne

    Alyssa,
    sounds like youve been through just as much as i have. thanks for the great comment it really ment somting to me. your poem is just amazing!
    keep in touch
    michelle

  • 16 years ago

    by Thrisa Allworth

    Thank you for your comment... that is not my best poem, but I am flattered!! keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Setareh Ghanooni

    i have no kind of senses for this poem but it rhymes good to me i mean i like the written form, style of it but the meaning...well at least you have a sense about it, right? (you comment mine too, others!)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lynz

    This poem is good, but I want to know MORE! It makes me curious, and it would be cool if you wrote a follow up to it or something...that would be really awesome
    Love always,
    Lyndsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Jason

    You did real good on this poem it is excellent. Keep up the good work.
    ~J.T.~

  • 16 years ago

    by JaSoNs LiL bAbY

    Great poem i liked it alot and thanx heaps for commenting on my poem

    *MWAH*

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess 69

    Nice job ive never been able to write a poem like that!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by JaSoNs LiL bAbY

    Hey thanks for commenting on my poem. i really like your poem it was very well written. it was very sad but it was nice and i liked it well done keep up the great work