what are you tlkin about bad that was good, i really liked it and keep up the good work, i wrote sum knew poems do u think u can mebe check them out? great job
always,
-Kit

Full of great meaning. Makes the reader think! It's not really bad at all. You do have a long life ahead of you and believe me you'll have some surprises along the way. I always wonder about life after death we all find out one day! Great poem! Take Care! Brooke~

absolutely excellent 5/5
~Freak~

this poem shows great potential...

Wow that left me thinking. I love poems like this, great eye opener...It had a very powerful meaning.

When I started I belittled my work as well. And I learned (and told by many) to stop doing that...calling my poems lame or whatever...you have to learn to not do that too. You have a lot of courage posting your feeling/thoughts for people to read...forget about people's opinions. Write truthfully and it will come out fine. You're talented; stop calling your work bad.

Great poem. I especially love the last stanza - good question!

xxx