I just get touchy when some one wants to do some thing to my girl.. :P

I love Krissta alot

-Josiah

well that's sweet you want to protect her :) great poem.

"But I was oh so wiser
and smarter
hes going to get hit in the eye
and hes gonna know why"
How do you get fives...?
Do you force your poetry to rhyme, because it really seems like you are trying to hard.
Let your poetry flow.
I'll be nice and give this a 3.

Thanks alot ;)

-Josiah

thank you so much I am glad you enjoy my poems so much ;)

Your welcome and thanks

-Josiah

aw thats so cute
good work
blessings
courtie

we need more MEN like you in the world lol

This is a great peom this girl ir very lucky to have u you care about every little thing love your writtin style great work 5/5
xoxo robyn