Sad my dear, truly touches my heart. hugs, love, Ann

I can relate to this very much. Amazing. Thanx for commenting on my poem. <333

xoxoRachel

Sadly, Katie, I did live this... but what doesn't kill me makes me stronger. Thanks, all, for the comments!

That was terrific. You did an excellent job, keep it up. Thanks for the comment.

~no more

OMG this is soo good 5/5 this is such a good poem omg i luv it

hey i luv ur poem i went thru some bad stuff when i was younger,except no matter wutt my dad wouldnt leave us alone he kept comin bac.i kno wuttt its like 2 be scared of ur father.it gets better so keep ur head up

Thanks, all!

Oh that was so sad and beautiful, I could feel all the emotions through it.
~anne~

i think that you did a good job on this poem i like it a lot and i know how you feel cuz the same thing is happening to me
love cheeks

omg...carlee, this is so good!!! i love it!! I got chills up and down! I'm so sorry that you had to go though that...i am...i think i have a bad dad, then i read this and see that you don't even have one. i hope you are ok. lylas
katie

Hey! This is an awesome poem. I went through the same thing. Except it wasn't just alchol it was drugs to. My dad is no longer in my life or my oldest brothers life, but he still talks to my other brother. As for me and my oldest brother he doesn't want a part of us cuz were like my mom but it's ok, cuz I don't need the abuse anymore. I've seen it all happen, brothers, mom and me all got abused from the drugs and alchol in his system. But that was a great poem Keep it up!

wow that is such an amazing write. Everything went together well the flow was natural. Excellent write. I am so sorry for what you went through, but you seem to have the right mind about it. Take care. <3333

Carlee,
Another awsome poem. Way to go. I'm so sorry you had to go through all of that. You are so strong...after all that and you are still standing, way to go! Good job Carlee. I'll always be here for ya...your my hero! Truly....you are so amazing. I love you so much, thatnks for all your help and keep staying strong.
Lots of love
~Chelsea

MAKES ME think of mine

I loved your poem and i feel bad but i'm glade you have a father there with you that is a father not someone who is a dad to you by blood only cause the greatest thing you have is a man who is not blood related to you who loves you and everything escept you as one of his own from the heart. I love your poem keep it up and never stop cause your a good writer and i would love to see m ore of what you've wrote.

Hey, this is really good...im glad ur doin ok...lotz of feelingz and emotionz...great job...take care and keep on writing, stay well..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

its good will u try and read some of mine when you get the chance?

hey i no how u feel i was put in like 6 foster homes and my father died but my mother abused me and most of the foster homes 2 and i was only like 3 or 4 now im with a good family but i dont no 4 how long keep up the good poems
glenn

wOw..GreAt poem..MwAz LuV it!! StePHy :)

this is just so amazing i can relate to this so much ur brilliant really talanted!!!
lilkit xx