Thinking

by Fatima Garcia   Jun 2, 2005


Just when you felt like you had everything
and it vanishes away like nothing
just because of a stubborn somebody
because she wants everything her way
so your dreams seem to be taken away.
And theres nothing to do but wait
hoping that everything goes your way
hoping its feelings not just fate.
And while waiting, your torn apart
just thinking and following you heart.
You know your right
your know your being fair
but you feel like no one cares
sometimes you think of giving up
but how would that be helpful
so all you can do is be hopeful
hoping that your dreams wont be taken away
hoping all your hard work will pay
but you know as long as theres that someone
you know its all going to go her way
so theres a chance you dreams are going to be taken away
just because things couldn't be fair
and people didn't seem to care!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem the only problem I had was the flow of it. But other then that it is a good poem. 4/5

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