Another well written poem.
One minor point though, in the second line which reads:

'You never gave me a reason to mistrust'

This line seems to long when compared with the rest of this poem. Maybe you could shorten it to something like:

'You never gave reason to mistrust'

Just a suggestion, still a good read though.

Keep Writing
Nici

hmmm, it was good, but not my favorite one of yours so far, although i could feel your emotions in this poem very well... *KISSES*~Corrie

This is a good poem. I really liked it.

Very deep, much better than the previous one I just read, you have very good writing methods in my opinion......

I agree with geena, that was the best part..

As for the rest of the poem, it is not your best...yet once again you manage to express your feelings through your words, and that makes me really enjoy the poem...

Good job

ummm...ok 4/5

very good! 5 stars for this one.. Please check out my poem "My dad: dead and gone forever" it would mean a lot to me.. hugs