great poem!! u are an excellent poet!!

you're really wise for your age... i know i'm not that much older but you learn a lot in 3 yrs... but it seems you've already learnt a lot before your time xxx never give up writing xxx

The wise old man...adds fantasy and makes a love poem interesting and charming.You did a pretty good job, I really liked it!

wow it painted a pic well done x)

Love poems are really good. And I really liked this one..

This was a very good poem, because older people do tend to tell you to love like that. great job!

aw thats so cute nd very sweet it flowed realy nicely well done!!! 5/5

Heartfelt and sincere words, with a steady rhythm. No more need to be said!

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Nici

aww.. i love this poem! it's a good "feel-good" poem!! nothing seemed to forced and it flowed very well!!! AWESOME JOB! and very creative! DEFINATELY A 5
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heyy thanks for the comment i loved this poem he very wise man he is.. great job writting it gave you a 5..

Okay it was a good poem sometimes it seemed a little rough to read

The wise old man said,
I would feel so good,
And he said if I meet happinness,
embrace it, I should.

like the really long line and then really short was kinda touch to read

good poem, cool idea, good job keep it up 4/5

Very good writing....I like your words

Aww, how sweet! :). this poem reminds me of Jeremy...hey is ur name really line? if so, tha's a cool thing to be named. 5/5

Hi Line,
most touching, yet I must say at 14 finding the one you will love 4 ever is quite a fine...

I've known people that have not found their soul mates their whole life time. :).

Take your time, get schooled, you will be wise like the old man...

You have many years ahead of you, give life what is owed, educate it, love it, appreciate it, share it and grow with it... and the one you love so dear will love you for who you are not for your youth.......

As we get older our physical change and so do our minds( good and bad).(smiling)... COntinue to write great love poems... Have a blast...