Emotions

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   Jun 5, 2005


Emotions runnin' through my head
emotions make me wish I'm dead
all these emotions seem so real
they make me unsure how to feel

should i be happy, sad, or grateful?
my confusion makes me feel so pitiful
unwanted, pathetic, and so distraught
is this the fate that i have caught?

emotions
commotion
emotions
devotion

emotions devoted to creating commotion
the disarray makes my mind decay
emotions makin' me feel this way
emotions will take my life one day

overwhelmed, overloaded
my minds so bloated
its about to explode
so i gotta unload

I'm livin' in vain
so ill abolish my pain
Ive nothin' to gain
so my blood i will drain

emotions
commotion
emotions
devotion

emotions got the best of me
they completely flooded my head
emotions got the best of me
and now I'm laying here dead.

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    This seems more like a song, but if you just want it to be a poem, it's still very good. I liked how you repeated :

    " emotions
    commotion
    emotions
    devotion "

    I thought it sounded awesome that way. I loved the idea of this poem, the topic was original ♥

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