written like a pro great job

Good Job, I love you passion for poetry! Keep it up!
Love Sarah

wow this was really good I loved it 5/5
Love always,
Elissa

I love this one, Heather. Very good. I actually just wrote one about Lucifer. It's "Fallen Angel of Music". I don't know how much you'll like it, but it's one of my personal favorites of my own. Again, such a great poem, this one. Keep up the great work, I get online every day to see if you have written anything more...truly. I love your poems. Anywho, gotta go read something besides poetry, it's almost 4am. tata

Eden

In a way it was true...but replace Lucifer with a different name. Same sort of deal, though. I'm not at a real liberty to discuss this kind of thing in the open, so I guess I'll leave it at that. It was funny because I just signed on and you had already written a comment;) talk to you later, tata

Eden

Great poem! Vivid imagery, perfect flow....well done! Love ya~Holly

Excellent write Heather, I especially love the last stanza and the last line, as He loses control over me. Great job

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

that was just awesome...i like that alot, thats gotta be one of my favorites on this site
take care,
-allen

awesome poem, great to see some new ones! can't read them all today, have to setudy for exams! bbl to read more of your wonderful work.

~PLP~ lots of hugs and love~

dis is really cool.

This is a battle I have fought many times, and it the light of grace and love that always prevail. I love it! If you get a chance, read mine called "The Coming Battle" and "Of Us". They're more visionary, but along the same line.

Yours Truly,
Brad