Powerful poem although some people have good reasons not tell the whole truth but I see where your coming from keep it up.

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Strong Meaning Behind Such a Powerful Ussage Of Words What An Excellent Poem! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

you know.. i think all of your poems should be in the featured thing.. none of them are bad!! i love them!! great job.. really makes a reader think!

I don't think this poem is quite as good as your others, although it is still a very powerful piece. The ending was awesome. Overall, it was a good poem.