My Reply

by BLaCK_RoSeS   Jun 5, 2005


Hey nisa my good friend
I'm sorry i wasn't there for u in the end
I'm sorry i didn't give you great advice
i didn't know what to say, and tried to be very nice
i didn't want you to end up hurting yourself
all you needed was a life of happiness and stealth
so let me try to patch things up, and to help you
because I'm here to give you a hand and thats true
our friendship only blossomed over the net
we started talking and thats how we met
you told me all your secrets and i told you mine
but what i didn't know was you were pretending to be fine
on the bus i was always the quiet one
while you kept talking about whats new and fun
i just smiled and listened to what you were saying
i couldn't see the hurt you felt, only the smiles you were displaying
he did horrible things to you, and was always in demand
but trust me girl, I'm always here to lend you a hand
I'm sorry for my advice being really, really bad
but it was the only thing on my mind that i had
so remember, trust me and don't end your world
because were all here for you girl

*hey sorry nisa for giving you crap advice i just didn't know what to say, don't hurt yourself cause you have a whole life ahead of you and you never know, on the trip to adult-hood, you might find the man of your dreams*

-this is a reply to Sweet-Smiles poem called Suicide Notes-

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  • 18 years ago

    by BLaCK_RoSeS

    uhh...ill take that as a compliment...:l