Thanks for the comment and keep writiting!....I like the last couplet.

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aww.. how sweet* :)

Chrissy<3

its good i like it...thanks for commenting on my poem...what did you mean by a sequal? do you mean i should write one of her making it through and one of her dieing? then that would make three wow....THANK YOU for that AWESOME idea....thnx much...please comment n rate on some of my other poems id like to hear your input.....thnx...xxx Angel