by Samantha Jun 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Disturbed waters, |
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Love this one! 5/5 thx for r/c on my poems |
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I loved the first paragraph, so strong and flowing...the rest went nicely as well, don't fear, but the first just stuck out above the rest. |
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i like this poem, have a nice flow, way to go you get a *5* |
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My grip slips, |
by nikki
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another great poem good job. |