Excellent poem! 5 Sometimes I wish it could happen to me too! <3

Beautiful!! it was such a lovely poem with such aweinspiring descriptions. i loved how it flowed like that in all the figuartive language, but still kept the real element and the message of it. excellent work! keep it up!

~*LorienElf*~

Thank you so much. xxx

This is such an amazing poem... i like the story line... i also like your useage of words...

ttyl
Maddy

thanks!