Unique wording...lol...I have to admit when I read the title I didn't expect much from the poem, "What do I hide behind my face?" just isn't poetical to me. But as I read, you really portrayed your emotions.

Nice work.

Fantastic poem, dear. Really good. I can relate to it. Keep writing and stay strong.

-Ice

loved it! this is exacly how i feel. i know how it is to feel this awful, but hide it and pretend your happy or try and be happy for them, i totally know how it feels. excellent flow too. keep it up!

~*LorienElf*~

This poem is great. I enjoyed reading it. I've put you in my favorites.
lots of love, Marjan

i can realte to this poem so much.... great job another 5/5

I think a lot of people can relate to this poem. It's hard but you have to move on from the past and always look at it as a learning experience. I have tried to hide my feelings too but I have a couple friends that see right through me. It's a good release to write your true feelings in poetry. I know how you feel! Good work! Take Care! Brooke~

great poem 5/5

Great write hun. I can definately relate to this one. Powerful write. Take care xxx

Portrays your feelings very well. I relate to your work. Thank you for sharing. And come out of hiding! be honest, i know it can be hard...but you can't keep it all inside forever. it's not healthy.

xxx

awsome poem! 5/5

~Natalie~ / cowgirlstar26