Comments : Somebody Asked Me Today

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    So sweet; I know exactly where you're coming from.

    Keep up your writing, you can really go somewhere.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Wow that was such a cute poem! 5 Keep writing! <3

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Thank you guys. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Naima

    Excellent. i LOVE IT. iIt's this crazy addictive love one which you can hardly think of anything but that one guy. I've been there and I love this poem. It's rockin' my socks. So yeah I remember going back to school and seeing this cute guy who sat in my row... He was so cute and handsome he's a pretty boy. I love pretty boys.*sighs* so yeah that weekend he was the only thing on my mind. All I did for the weekend was jump on my bed and sing and shout, and giggle and laugh. It was so exhilarating, wow and they came back when I read this poem. right girl write!!!!! love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by otto

    I liked the picture you paint, maybe more detail in the picture

  • 18 years ago

    by xღxBeckyxღx

    Hey I really liked this poem, keep up the good work x x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    That was a great poem! I really liked it a lot. (",)

    ~Krissy

  • 18 years ago

    by Mariah

    I love that poem it is the BEST. That is exactly what I think about my boyfriend

  • 18 years ago

    by shes a killer

    That's really pretty.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Wow I love this poem. It makes me think of my bf so much. Great work :):)

    also, just one thing :) in your last verse...3rd line, I think you should have "she asked who I loved the most". I'm sorry to be a nag!! I mean no offence love, sorry. =) I absolutely LOVE this poem <3 Great work, keep writing, you obviously are a fabulous writer with great talent xxxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 18 years ago

    by erika

    5\5 from me

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    thank you everyone. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Maddie

    Wow! thats a really cute poem, i enjoyed reading it. I really like your last stanza..

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Thanks!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    aw I love it.. the ending is perfect! thanx for your comments... to answer your question my poem is called untitled because I can't think of a title to fit it yet. Take care and nice work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie Shepard

    *smiles stupidly* very nice!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Thank you.

  • 16 years ago

    by swill

    Somebody asked me today
    A question that I already knew
    She asked who I love the most
    And my answer was you

    ^^

    And that's my poem for you. ;)