I love it! I'ts a wonderful poem.

Keep on writing and allways believe
</3 Erin

Excellent poem! 5.0 I can really relate to this poem!

Awww that was so sad and cute at the same time...Sometimes I feel the same way. I totally loved this. very creative. xxx

Really interesting.

I love your imagery. You wrote this very, very superbly.

Also, I have to say that your meter is well founded. There are a few ragged parts but otherwise, the lines fit.

i can see how it could be a little confusing. what i was trying to do is put the aspects of real person in there to really show how sadness can turn to anger, but back to sadness again with the consequences. thanks all for reading and i'll start to comment back on yours!

~*LorienElf*~

I voted 5! =D I luff this poem. I think it's your best. But why are you so sad? *hugs* Sadness says no.

Powerfully written! I really admire the creativity and the vivid imagery. Well done. Take care and keep it up~Holly

Excellent job
I really enjoyed this poem it was very well written and the flow was easy to follow
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You A good writter