Stop loving you....

by ♥broken fairytales♥   Jun 8, 2005


I'll stop loving you when......
When diamonds never sparkle
And flowers cease to grow
When thunder doesn't echo
And rivers never flow
When hearts no longer wonder
And hands are never held
When smiles are only memories
And hope is never felt
When trees no longer blossom
And stars refuse to shine
When autumn has no falling leaves
And winter never dies
When time has no tomorrow's
And rainbows have no gold
When god alone commands me
Then I'll stop Loving you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emerald

    Your poems very good it rimes and got a good meaning. I like it very much and gave it a 5/5! the ending could have been better but still it`s a great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    Wow, amazing... (just to let you know, the gold under the rainbow is a superstition like-thingy) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    This is sssssssooooooooooo good...i love this poem...i really think that this should have like a lot more votes and comments than you have...great 5/5...if you ever need to talk you know i'm alwayz here 4 u...take care...

  • 18 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    well done baby thats really good!!! u r so flippin gd at this lolz luv ya xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Aww. how elegant. Reminds me of the old pop song of Nsync's "That's When I'll Stop Loving You" or something. But I definatly like yours better =P Very Nice job, hun. 5/5

    <3 Heather.

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