Why?

by ashley   Jun 8, 2005


Why do you judge me with those ice cold eyes?
Why attack me with such deceit and lies?
I don't really care about rumors or shoes.
That in no way gives you power to choose
Who I am, or label me by just a passing by.

Because of my responsibility to decide,
Your taunting me and bein cruel Will never make me hide.
I will laugh because all you're achieving in this school
Is labeling yourself a blind and simple fool.

why should you care for what I say or for the clothes i wear?
Is there no better use of time than the gossip that you share?
I pity you, you wayward soul; who would want a life like yours,
To live to build yourself up by your ripping others down?
All you do is make them look smart and yourself look like a clown.

i hope everyone likes this poem better and i want you guys to know i cant take all the credit for the rewrite because i had a ton of help from Brad Champagne. you all should check his work out his poems are great!

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  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    thanks for commenting! i have decided to rewrite the poem and i hope you will enjoy the new one better!

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    hey im not mad i appreciate ppl being honest it helps me write better poems if you could tell me exactly where you started to lose interest i would be realy thankful!