Wow that was really something. It was really awesome. It was well written and the ryhme jus flowed well. It shows true emotion ant it was very heart felt. Great work!!!! 5/5 =)

Can u plz read my poem My Story thanks!!!=)

omg that is so sad! I hope ur ok hunny! :) smile (for me)

great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5

A sad topic, that was conveyed well by the use of your descriptive language.

Keep Writing
Nici

That has to be one of the most emotion filled poems I have ever read. It reaches to that part of you that makes it all come together, not only in your head but in your heart as well. I loved the flow and use of words. It makes it easy to fall right into. Keep writing and expressing these feelings!

~*~Christina Lynn~*~

That was an emotional write. Saying goodbye can be really hard and you sure portray that in this piece. Very nice flow and well expressed! Nice write here! :)

omg another great one..i was only gonna read 2 but i couldnt help myslef you write so good....5/5 i felt alot of agression great way of showing your feelings to the rest of us!

Once again, another amazing poem! i love ur writings so much! theyre just great!

Thats so deep you write amazingly mine are crap but plz comment and vote on some of mine x

very beautiful poem...very touching! nice job!

I like how you repeated the first stanza at the end. I am not a huge fan of suicide poems but if i was i would probably really like this. nice job.