U promised,i slit

by «±»TeAr StAiNeD AnGeL«±»   Jun 12, 2005


You promised me you would be there till the end
you promised non of your promises were pretend!
you promised me the sunshine
you promised me the rain
all of it was crap
and you drove me half insane
i won't tell i lie
and say I'm OK
cos of you I'm going to die!
I'll slit it deep
I'll slit it to collide
you left me with no choice but suicide!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Great poem
    expressive and wonderful
    love it
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by nanz

    nice poem but hun u need to stop cutting, and talking about suicide, its so lame, pointless and hurtful. ive cut befor, for a long time but i no longer do it becoz one enlightening but upsetting and scary night i found out what its like to have osmeone u care about destroy themselves, and realised how much im hurting my friends by doing this selfish act.

    people love you lots, i dont even know you but i know they do.

    please do not cut anymore. and try to be happy.
    ur awesome at writing poetry (ive read ur other poems) and im sure u have many other awesome qualities.

    xoxoxox nanz

  • thanx for commentin it means alot!! amanda and briana

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