The last two lines seal it for me; so well composed. I love it <3

Love you sweetie,
//.Kals

another masterpiece...by one herself...

love,
ish

i love the entire event of the poem leading up unto the end.

seemingly sweet mixed in with bitter defeat.

5/5

yeah the end really sums it up for me.. depressing yet so good..
love you
[[samz]] <3

wow...i love this...i gotta read this again.

5.5

love and hugs