Wow, really good! The title totally goes with the poem!

A unique take on an interesting topic. This poem makes me think about all the 'artifical' people in todays society.

Keep Writing
Nici

hey Renee, this poem's very very good. just keep it up. lots of love, Marjan

Watch out for spelling and grammar in some places. I liked the story and flow of this poem. Sometimes the rhyme scheme felt a bit forced.

Thanks for the insight Kayla but I was reading on someone elses poem and they said they don't change their work after they write/post it, and I think thats what im going to do.

thank you all for the comments!

good poem!!! i loved it actually.

thank you for the comment.
be proud ok????

love sammi

great work, :) 5 of course

I used to wear make up when I was your age. Never went anywhere without it and one day my Boyfriend/pal (lol) came over unexpected and told me I looked better without it. For what ever reason that hit me so hard and I haven't worn make up but once or twice since then. I did to my companys christmas party and I think on my birthday two years ago. People get so caught up in what they think is "beauty" and lose sight of the what's REALLY BEAUTIFUL and you show that. This was a very well done piece.....Nice write Coonay!!

wow that was such a great analogy! i dont even know how to describe how excellent this was! your so talented! i loved the ending to!
>>5/5<<
*bec* xXx

True beauty can be hard to discover. This poem is beyond excellent. I absolutely love it. A lot of people (esp girls in the more literal way) can relate to this. Thank you! Keep writing like this; it's perfect.

xxx

that was so sad, and i loved how it ended. great poem 5/5 i can completely understand how the person with the make-up feels