I really really like this one bj! Can i send it to my dad? hehe. its great. it really is. i loved all of urs so far. keep going!!! i wanna read some more. mwah xxxxx :D -mike

Great job, I'm sure it's so hard being without him. Bless you and the family. hugs, love, Ann

hey there, is ur husband overseas? My dad just came back 3 months ago, my prayers and best wishes are with ur family.

hey may i use ur poem for fathers day?
when i was born my dad was in Desert Storm. my prayers are with your family i know how hard it is to be missing a part of your family laying in bed at night looking out the window when ever you see head lights, and trying to imagine that gentle siloet standing in the bedroom door way and watching you family miss them.

much love,
becca
Age 15

hey i live in mississippi too :P
Harmontown bout 20 mins away from como in lafayette county. keep your spirits up gurl!

much love,
becca

thank you all for ur comments. ill return the favor

I agree with stef it was awsome. Verry touching. I would like to put it in my daughters poem scrap book if i could.

its fine with me

aww that was cute ur really good 5/5

it was good 5/5

Beautifully written! I'm sure you miss him so much it's hard to be away from the ones that you love! What a very touching piece! ~Brooke~

Aww that was so touching and beautifully written. I hope things are easy for you. xxx

aww this was a sweet poem.

i love the emotion you show in this poem! nice job! keep it up!