great poem! "I see a love connection" 5

Christina, that was not bad at all! I loved it. It was a really beautiful poem. I'm really sorry you feel that way. Please feel better though. I wuv you! <3

~Krissy

if that poem is not good, i dunno what is.. =) i like it-like iti! 25/5

Wow, once again, amazing. Great job.
~Jamie~<3

You did a great job on this poem......i really liked the ending.Keep up the great work.
Jenessa

it is awesome!!! i love it!!!!!!! some of ur lines r too long and rhythms doesnt go then..but it is still so good!

It was really nice and im so sorry that it came to an end, a broken heart huts so much and its an experience i guess we all have to go through sadly
5/5
xoxoBam

Excellent poem, im sorry it came out that way...but I really liked this. keep it up xxx

that was a really good poem i really liked it bcuz that refers somewat 2 me bcuz i had a boyfriend and it was great spending time w/him but it all ended
**Yahaira**

that was a really good poem i really liked it bcuz that refers somewat 2 me bcuz i had a boyfriend and it was great spending time w/him but it all ended
**Yahaira**

GREAT POEM!!! :D:D -Mike

I liekd it alot except where u said it's stupid and not good cuz thats totally not true at all!! don't be so hard on yourself you're really good and keep writting

That is such a good poem. I really really liked it. Good job 5/5. Check out mine.

yes they do end sometimes - but we go on and remember.... it does get better

It's not stupid.

Well you know what they say "Better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all". Not sure I agree, but thought it would cheer you up! 5/5

Hey, this is good...wow :( started to make me cry...*hugz* i hope ur alrite..and thanx for the comment on my poem...it meant so much to me..and i hope ur rite...<3 Take care and keep on writing, this was awesome
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

I disagree with you concluding comment about this poem being stupid and not good. I really like it. I agree that it's the little things in a relationship that really make it exciting. And it's not just being in love that makes you happy, its being in love with that person that makes you happy. so anyways, i liked it. great job. 5/5

Awww how sad i think you should name it....ONE THING I HATE!! you dont got to change it to that but thats just my opinion so dont get upset. well of course like all your other ones great poem 5/5