This is REALLY GOOD! Gr8 work! I'll r8 it a 5. Beautiful poem. Peace! //ari\\

From the heart, and very subdued in it's expression, well conveyed.

aw this is such a sad poem....very wonderfully written great job 5/5!

very well written, could almost be a dark poem even i think? it's really good, love the title too!
~Christina

wow this is really good it hink every1 should read i like free verse type poems 5/5

good job, keep writing i really enjoy your poems!:)

another great piece of writing.
you are tallented.

Jacs
xxx

wow, it's so sad and very well presented
as well.
love you,
marjan

awesome you have alot of talent good job its awesome :D